hello, my name is Dwane
today im gonna show you my 100 word challenge work.
this is my 100 word challenge
There used to be a rat named Timmy that lived quietly in a restaurant that was called Ratzzarant. It was a sunny sunny day the Ratzzarant was open but nobody was around so little Timmy looked around then he found this giant thing on the floor and it had a button that said teleport. Then Little Timmy pressed the button then something weird happened and he suddenly was in a house. Then he saw a massive cat ready to eat anything but little Timmy saw a cup. Then he hid and found some chips then he ate them all. The end.
HI Dwane. Its Sean, Nice story I like the part with the porthole and the part with ratzzarant eating the chips maybe you could put some more pun
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